Wednesday, July 22, 2009

Contoh Karangan 2

Ini adalah contoh karangan bahasa Melayu penulisan, kalau tak silap saya, penulis karangan ini adalah murid sekolah rendah. Contoh karangan ini diambil dari web nih. Kalau kita baca kat komen-komen tu semua kata lawak. Jom kita pakat baca dan hayati...


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Emmm... selepas beberapa kali mengulangi membaca karangan pendek adik ni, memang la saya rasa nak tergelak kah kah kah... (tapi memang dah terguling-gulung dah pun!). Secara seriusnya, adik ni memang mampu membuat karangan yang lebih baik dan bermutu. Tengokla, ada isi yang baik. Mungkin tajuk karangan ini mengenai seorang anak yang menunggu kepulangan ibubapa, mungkin juga tajuk mengenai benda atau perkara yang menakutkan yang pernah dialami dan pelbagai kemungkinan yang lain. Tengoklah tulisan adik ini pun nampaknya begitu cantik dan kemas sekali. Penggunaan "di" sebagai penghubung kata juga bersesuaian dengan penggunaan ayat yang digunakan. Adik ini juga mungkin suka membaca cerita-cerita dan buku komik seperti mestika, majalah Ujang dan juga menonton cerita-cerita menakutkan yang banyak menular di televisyen sekarang ini, seperti Keliwon dan pernahkah anda menonton drama "Wajah Sutinah" mungkin pada penghujung tahun 80an dan awal 90an, semasa saya masih di bangku sekolah, cerita itu amat menakutkan saya, begitu terkesan sekali. Apa-pun adik ini jika diasuh dan diberi tunjuk ajar yang betul oleh gurunya pasti akan dapat menghasilkan karangan yang lebih baik dan bermutu...

post signatureFuh! Dasat betul aku baca karangan adik nih, boleh mengundang gelak ketawa aku sampai keluar air mata. Haha, gurunya pun macam best je, siap boleh tanya "Hantu tu gembira tak?" Hehehe... Dari manalah adik ni mendapat idea untuk membuat karangan nih. Karangan aku dulu macam mana ye? Entahle dah lupa laa... Nanti kalau balik cuti nih, aku nak semak karangan anak saudara aku Khayr tu, bagaimana agaknya ye, budak ni pun boleh tahan otak kartun juga nih.

39 comments:

maymot said...

"Saya sangat takut lalu saya pergi buka pintu.Hantu itu sangat takut..."

hi3...hantu tu pun jadi takut sebab 'saya' tu takut tak abis2...

karangan BM bkn satu perkara yg senang..hu3
ms sekolah2 karangan kak pun teruk tambah2 kalau topik karangan tak best...
tambah2 kalau karangan yg memerlukan fakta...

penah sekali ja dapat karangan A sebab tajuk karangan tu pasal kejadian yang tak dapat dilupakan kot..
jadi leh reka ikot suka ati...he3

maymot said...

kak baru2 ni dapat surat 'centa' dari cekgu anak kak...hu3

piz said...

tu la kak memot... budak ni beto2 takut ke hantu tu la tu...

ambo ngan adk bradik ambo dulu, keno tulis mmolek karange, sbb lph wak karange nnti abah ambo akn check beto ke saloh, kalo beto, sedap molek ayat, abah ambo puji laaa, kalu teruk gak waaa keno komen teruk laaaa, sampai ke tulisan semo abah ambo komen, pahtu keno wak smula, letih laaa... kiro beto2 pengkritik laaa...

tp hok bes, bilo d skoloh, cg baco karange kito dlm kelas.... hehehe, maso tu gak suko la, msti siap sokmo kerja rumoh karange... kalu homework math, bi mesti x siap sokmo, sbb x suko sgt... hehe, loni terbalik la pulok!!

takpo surat cento dr cg kelas anok kak, xpo lg... kiro normal la... kalo sorat cento dr budok sekelas jh, bahayo sket... ;)

Cybernetics Mind said...

hehehe...
ayat yg last tu tabley tahannn....

piz said...

hola cm ...lawok la budok ni ngan cg dia skali lawak. adoi laa

dzura said...

hi, sy adzura..guru dr bintulu. sy ternampak pic sapura aka uya dalam your post about hari guru. anyway, can u send my msg to her? ckp dgn sapura, tlg call k.zura. it's URGENT. saya dah tak tahu cara macam mana lagi nak hubungi dia. anyway, sy cumah dihubungi weekend sahaja. don't worry, uya ada no hp saya. thanks, hanya Allah saja dpt membalas kebaikan awak.

Asma' said...

mm..kelakar betul la krngan ni..ehehe..
'hantu itu sangt takut'
sebenrnye sape y takut sape skunk ni...
saya takut hantu..or hntu y takut tengok saye...ehehe
p yelah kn..kita ni da dewasa..mmg la nk tergelak..
p budak2..ilmu karang mengarang mybe kurang lagi..baru nk belajar...ehehe..
ntah2 tersilap buat ayat sbb teringt lagi peristiwa jumpe hntu tu...
jadi sngt takut n sapa tersilap susun ayat..ehehe..
siap ader note lagi "jumpa cikgu"
ehehe...masak la budak tu...hihihi

piz said...

dzura...

ok, bereh doh. ambo royak doh ke uya tu.

oo nk ready utk intvew ke?
good luck la, lulus cpt, blh mitok tuka cpt dok ;)

ambo x keno panggil lg, xtau la bilo dio nk panggil. hok ambo tau geng2 bintulu mingg ni duk sibuk intvew dh nih.

guano zura blh sesat msk sini nih?
kena ambo dok? ambo x brapo nk kena namo zura nih, kalo tgk tue, ambo kena a. ambo hmate kt ipkb tu ngan ma psv hok duk bintulu tu. kena la tu ;)

piz said...

Asma'

Ho la, lucu la budok nih.
hantu ngan budok tu samo2 takut la kut...
mace2 kalu kito baco karangan bdk nih.tu ok lg, xdok campur loghat ngan bahasa lain tu bm standard molek tu.
kalu baco karangan yg bercampur loghat klate ke ganu ke, bhs iban ke, lagi laaa...

tu la,pening kepala le cg bm nnk betulkn balik pemahaman bahasa budak2 nih...

cg bagus la ni, siap suh jumpa dia lg, tp xtau la budak tu gi jumpa ke x.

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